help : you can read this lettre that i have write in order to correct it?

• I’m a Moroccan student. In June 2009, I will pass the exam of the Moroccan baccalaureate “type : mathematics”. I have passed with success the exam which allows me a direct admission at university Al akhawayne for the next semester (autumn 2009), program “Bachelor of Science in Engineering and Management”. I would like to have a financial support in order to be able to reach this engineering cycle which constitute a dream for me.
  Reasons for making this request are :
  
  The salary of my father remains insufficient because of the bank credits, particularly the credit of the house which will last until 2017 (see details on the bank statements and the credit contracts). Moreover, like the majority of the Moroccan families, my parents have to help financially my grandparents.
  Due to some serious health problems, my mother will have to leave its work as soon as possible.
  
  Consequently, without a financial support, it will not have the possibility to reach University Al Akhawayne.

  dari 27 may 2009, 08:01 - Denunciar

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